" Joe the Lion - made of iron"
said David Bowie
influenced by
Dylan Thomas
Walt Whitman
William Shakespeare
Ovid
Virgil
Lucretius
Epicurus
Democritus
Pythagoras
his wife Theano
- who discovered
The Golden Mean
magic number in
architecture
shells
sunflowers
MELONEY LEMON: SWEET AND SOUR.
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This is really great! I think I like it even better than the original. How about you?
Thanks dewey.
Has anyone noticed that this peom is now in the shape of a sitting lion?
clever clever clever ...
I guess that's the thing about poems - you can just keep on refining.
Hi, would you please pass this note along to Homer? I invite him to come visit me on my new blog, Literary Lion of Lyon. He would probably recognize me from the blog’s title, but tell him Roary sent the invitation. Thanks.
Roary ^..^
I liked the first version better.I think the second one only works for people who read the first
thought the poem was in the shape of a pillar of wisdom! I like first one better - I think it communicates more effectively. But thats completely subjective - but then, can a literary opinion ever be objective?
This is really great, one of my favourites!
Hey!
Congratulations on your award at Shameless Lions Writing Circle!
That's great!
Scarlett & Viaggiatore
Yay! You won a prize! I wallow in reflected glory ...
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